Napoleon started out enthusiastic and lots of joy for the rebellion then later on when he was in power he started to become lazy and drink alcohol which meant me broke one of the commandments ” No animal shall drink alcohol.” He then got squealer to change the commandment to ” No animal shall drink alcohol in excess.” Napoleon later on became to start acting more like humans wanting money, sleeping in beds ,wearing clothes, drinking alcohol, wanting food and power. He even changes 1 one the commandments to ” All animals are equal but some animals are more equal than others.” Referring to Napoleon himself.
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Add Yours →Both of your two paragraphs are running into the same issues. You have very strong statements to start with and are doing a good job following the SEX part of the structure but you are not following through with the Y part. Your points get a little unclear as well as you drift away from the question you are being asked. Remember it is about how these events changed one character (Napoleon) from the beginning of the novel to the end of the novel.