Show don’t tell

Showing rather than telling people

Grieving, the boys face was drenched in tears as he punched his fist against the wall screaming in anger.

Barking around the backyard excitedly he came racing over as I took the leash off the hook, his big bulging eyes peeing straight into mine.

shivering, I stood there looking at my own breathe temperature dropped. The sun was looking down at me as the day started to begin.

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