Napoleon started out as small innocent pig that was eager to get off the farm and out of the hands of the controlling humans. But once the farm was overtaken by Napoleon and all of the other animals he made 7 commandments that were to be followed and obeyed. However these commandments changed throughout the book.These 7 commandments were, 1. No animals shall sleep in a bed, 2. Whatever goes upon 2 legs is an enemy, 3. whatever goes upon 4 legs or has wings is a friend, 4. No animals shall wear clothes, 5. No animal shall drink alcohol, 6. All animals are equal, 7. No animal shall kill any other animal. Napoleon wanted all of the power throughout the farm and always told the animals “remember Napoleon is always right.”
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Add Yours →This reads more like a body paragraph rather than an introduction. In it you have a Statement, Explanation and an eXample, though you need to add in the Your thinking/opinion aspect. This does not use TAKO as you do not mention the Title or the Author, you also have not used the keywords from the question and you don’t outline any of the points you’ll be making in your following paragraphs, instead only focusing on a single point. Go back over the TAKO structure to see what you need to have in the introduction.